[sae-aadl] Readability suggestions - Part 1-ADL

[Mark Brown]

Hello,

As a newcomer to the standard, I wanted to offer the attached suggestions to
help improve readability.  My goal is to reduce possible confusion for new
readers.

 

It's possible that I may have misunderstood what the standard currently says
at points.  Hopefully even my mistakes can help a little.

 

Best regards,

 

Mark Brown

System Architect



Safety & Security for the Connected World

 

 

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